Reflection|Journal Entry Day 17

  In class, the discussion was tips on setting up body paragraphs, learning info about the book, textual support, evidence, claim, and commentary. I need work on finding reasonable claims to answer the prompt. Commentary is what the essay should primarily be about. Since, it is the person telling how he or she sees it. My teacher also spoke on having 3 books  in our back pocket fresh on the mind. Figuratively. Meaning, names, events, and theme. Theme plays a role. Most of the questions says answer the meaning of the work as a whole. Simliarily.

  Day 17:
 I practiced with my Drill Team. Alot of commands are not executed the right way. Some people understand at a faster pace than others. However, freshman take JROTC. So, some the commands should not be hard. Guaranteed, our team will execute on commands and do a great job!

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