Reflection|Journal Entry Day 18

  In Mr.Rease class, the lesson was going over claims and how to write it correctly or finding the right one. To find the right one, first a person has to read the prompt and see what is the question asking. Second, gather up or set up a planner. However, it should not take lomg because students are in a room for about 4 hours taking the tests. Then, write the introductory paragraph, thesis statement. After, it is claims, textual support, commentary, second part of that. Atleast 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion paragraph.

  Day 18:
 Today, I practiced with my Drill Team. At this point, it should be no excuses to why somebody cannot be on the right command or do it correctly. To me, it look like some people want to be in the Drill Team just to be in it and really do not want to work on theirselves. I would like to bring a trophy down to 1st Sgt.Wright, 1st Sgt.Gill, and Colonel Brady, and Morgan Brown be respomsible for that. Some people must do not want the trophy then.

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